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So, I couldn't get my Halloween story done on time, but I was inspired by the revamping of [livejournal.com profile] 100_ghosts.



Title: Night of All Souls
Prompt: Skeleton in the closet

They walk down the beach, hand in hand. Watch as the S.W.A.T team surrounds a bungalow with boarded windows.

"They kill two guys," Sam says. "Homeless, crashing for the night."

"How do you--"

He knows because it happened. Papers ran the story, years ago.

So the sand sprinkled through her hair is just a memory, sun dancing in her eyes just a dream. Sam sighs.

She squeezes his hand. "Must be awful," she says. "To have to make those decisions." She stops. "But they do."

"Jess, I--"

The ocean fades. Sam opens his eyes, too late to tell.

2007-10-31 23:07 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] ignipes.livejournal.com
Oh, Sammy. Too late for a lot, isn't it?

This is beautiful.

2007-10-31 23:42 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
But still time to save Deeeean!

Thanky :D

2007-10-31 23:54 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] ignipes.livejournal.com
Definitely still time for that. Ten months, in fact. Sammich better get crackin'.

2007-10-31 23:09 (UTC)
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- Posted by [identity profile] oxoniensis.livejournal.com
Sad, but lovely.

2007-10-31 23:44 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
Yes. :( And thank you. :)

2007-11-01 11:03 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] girlmostlikely.livejournal.com
N'awww, honey. Poignant and perfect! ♥

2007-11-01 20:15 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
Thanky! (and thank YOU for taking on this comm again. :D )

2007-11-01 12:56 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] iamstealthyone.livejournal.com
Nicely done. Poor Sam, living with the guilt of never telling her the truth.

Favorite lines:

So the sand sprinkled through her hair is just a memory, sun dancing in her eyes just a dream.

Good description.

"Jess, I--"

The ocean fades. Sam opens his eyes, too late to tell.


Oh, Sam.

2007-11-01 20:16 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
Thank you! Poor, Sammich. I wish there was a happier way to address the prompt. Must muse on this.

2007-11-01 20:08 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
Oh *WIBBLE*

Great one, m'dear.

2007-11-01 20:15 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
Thanky! (also: comment JINX)

2007-11-01 20:20 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] deirdre-c.livejournal.com
Is it possible that we are online at the same time! *boggles*

Perhaps we can synch up again in exactly 4 hours and 35 minutes? :)

2007-11-01 20:21 (UTC)
- Posted by [identity profile] krisomniac.livejournal.com
*checks outside for flying pigs*

i'll be there, babe!

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